tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4053184581558493845.post5151596023509285018..comments2023-09-24T12:13:35.600-04:00Comments on Scribbler's Sojourn: It's BLOG HOP time! A simple comment, and you could win my MEANS OF MERCY series!Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14701924930702018352noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4053184581558493845.post-87094067253784458632017-11-17T18:17:30.721-05:002017-11-17T18:17:30.721-05:00If I don't get pulled in when reading books or...If I don't get pulled in when reading books or if it ends bad...not keeping the facts straight.Amber C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/05532847218559569296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4053184581558493845.post-17139099973683690622017-11-11T20:55:56.804-05:002017-11-11T20:55:56.804-05:00No establishment of a story line within a couple c...No establishment of a story line within a couple chapters and if its too easy to figure out a mystery.One Woman Juggler Dawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15486478843034132302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4053184581558493845.post-27927170775185341402017-11-09T20:12:41.252-05:002017-11-09T20:12:41.252-05:00Bad grammar and spelling, plus head-hopping within...Bad grammar and spelling, plus head-hopping within chapters.Amanda Mackey Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12471601441794285818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4053184581558493845.post-4843539929325796822017-11-09T20:11:49.329-05:002017-11-09T20:11:49.329-05:00If there is an established couple in a book one of...If there is an established couple in a book one of them cheating on the other will make me put a book down real quick.Belindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14232672283544755020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4053184581558493845.post-7430467975077331312017-11-09T14:16:31.061-05:002017-11-09T14:16:31.061-05:00Way too much description. Or a crappy ending. If e...Way too much description. Or a crappy ending. If everyone dies, that's not good. (And I have read a book like that.)Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4053184581558493845.post-5200628297503227722017-11-09T09:21:40.397-05:002017-11-09T09:21:40.397-05:00If there is no hookIf there is no hookAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12219642430058727391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4053184581558493845.post-64454886870781025292017-11-09T06:06:29.368-05:002017-11-09T06:06:29.368-05:00Bad grammar and not keeping facts straight like yo...Bad grammar and not keeping facts straight like you said. Thanks for the chance. phager73@gmail.comAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12651651549438717949noreply@blogger.com