Friday, October 19, 2012

#FreeviewFriday #MakeBelieve Part 1

Welcome to my debut Freeview Friday! Thanks J.A.Belfield for this awesome idea.

Today I’m sharing a snippet from my story, Sacrificial Oath, from J. Taylor Publishing’s Make Believe Anthology which releases December 3rd.


“Father!” Alesuela called out, knowing he would be displeased with her for leaving the palace grounds. “Father!” she cried again, recognizing the dark-haired man leading the army.
Clinking armor and creaking leather stopped as the Sovereign of Vecina held up a fist.
Alesuela’s steps slowed when her father’s face became visible through the settling dust. “Father?”
“Beloved Goddess,” Amant gasped, his stubbled cheeks ashen, “anyone but her.” He dismounted, started toward Alesuela and fell to his knees.
The earlier sense of dread flooded over her . She took a hesitant step forward. “Father, please … are you alright?”
He didn’t answer but held his head in his hands, moaning.


Hope you enjoyed it! Be sure to stop back next week for the next tasty morsel.

As J.A. Belfield has said, any and all are welcome to join her in this weekly shenanigan. HOWEVER, if you do so, she URGE syou to keep the shared snippets short and sweet. Mine (like hers) will be a maximum of TEN (10) sentences. To help identification of these posts, we’ll be hashtagging them (for Twitter purposes) as #FreeviewFriday. Feel free to knick said hashtag for your own Freeview Friday posts. Hope you’ll join us!


  1. Nice work. Since I know the story behind the scene, it is even more powerful than before. Everyone should check out "Make Believe!"